The Screams of Eleven (Part 2)

The Screams of Eleven (Part 2) is a sequel to The Screams of Eleven. Donald hopes to finally succeed in writing a full trilogy outside his Honor Stories (despite Tyler and Nancy being major characters in the previous story).

Plot and Settings
A year after surviving the Raider (Tyler and Nancy Carter) killing spree set by Tarevender, Eleven is trying move on without her biological father (Negan) with her sister Skyler and boyfriend Mike, and their friends. However, Tarevender sends a new Raider to target Eleven and the Clearwood Six.

Chapter 1
It’s nighttime in a deserted field. The only source of light is the moon and the stars. It looks peaceful and beautiful out here. But in a moment it will be the sight of blood and death. We hear gunshots from both ends of the screen. Bullets fly around us. Suddenly, people in uniforms come from both ends. The left side is the good side; SURFACK (grey/brown uniforms) and the right side is the bad side; TAREVENDER (black uniforms). Both sides receives casualties. Neither is better than the other. This is the war between good and evil.

Behind Surfack is their leader -- KEVIN ANDREWS (38). He appears like someone you’d feel safe and confident with. And he gives that vibe as he leads his soldiers into battle. A very John Connor-George Washington-like leader. Even as he’s getting shot at, Kevin is calm and cool. He is a perfect shot and shoots down every Tarevender in his tracks. Anyone who tries to shoot Kevin fails as he’s a master in the art of war. It’s because of him that Surfack has a chance at winning against the powerful Tarevender army.

Aside from the regular Tarevender soldiers, there also are GHOSTFACE KILLERS: Father Death, Brandonface, Francis, Devilface, Gas Mask, Red Hood, Scarecrow, Bloody Face, Rinoface, Chromeface, and many other classic Scream killers. They get the most Surfack casualties, easily killing them off with their weapons despite not having guns. They try to reach Kevin, his second in command, and one of his Lieutenants. But the three Surfack leaders shoot them all down, except for Chromeface, who is the leader of this Tarevender platoon.

We find that the field leads to a MAJOR TAREVENDER BASE (Not the main Headquaters). Chromeface gets a ride back to his base as his own men are shot down. He goes inside and goes into the control room. He calls the Governor, who is the Commander-in-Chief of Tarevender. He tells the Governor that they’re being overwhelmed by Surfack. The disappointed Governor tells Chromeface to abandoned the base and to set it for self-destruct. Chromeface says, “Yes, Governor.” And their calls ends.

Chromface gets on the P.A. system and orders his soldiers to “ABANDON STATION! EVERY MAN FOR HIMSELF!” Realizing that despite their power and strength, the Tarevenders must retreat. Almost every Tarevender soldier and remaining Ghostface killer run away from their base. Some soldiers and Ghostface killers stay behind to defend their base for as long as they can. Chromeface presses the “Self Destruct” button. It counts down to a minute. He takes a transporter that will easily get him away from the Surfack forces. Chromeface has escaped.

Outside the base, we see the remaining Tarevenders running away. Those still there are being shot down by Surfack. Kevin points to the base, telling his soldiers that they have to get inside that building. But before they can make it to the base -- BOOM!. The entire base explodes from the self destruct bomb. With that, aside from those that escaped, the rest of the Tarevenders and Ghostface killers present in this battle has been killed either by being shot by Surfack or from the explosion. This is a victory for Surfack. But they are disappointed as they had hoped to gain information from the base.

We TRANSITION TO later. The Surfack soldiers have taken the fire out and have been searching the remains of the base. One of them finds a thumb drive. He presents it to Kevin, who tells his Tech Specialist to check it out. The Tech Specialist connects the thumb driver to his laptop. He reads through the files that the thumb drive contains. He states that these are plans for assassinations, kidnappings, and other activities. Kevin says that they have found what they are looking for. But the Tech Specialist says that he found something on Eleven.

Kevin asks the Tech Specialist to look into it, which he does. The Tech Specialist informs Kevin that Tarevender is planning for a new Raider killer to kill the survivors of the previous Raider murder spree and to kidnap Eleven again. Kevin asks who the new Raider is. The Tech Specialist says that there is no name. Just that it’s the Raider, which means the new Raider’s true identity is never used even within Tarevender itself. Most likely to protect themselves. This is a problem. Kevin says that it’s time to send MIB into action. His first mission as a Surfack.

Back at the Surfack Headquarters, Kevin is in his office with MIB (MAN IN BLACK), who we saw at the end of the first story. Kevin is telling MIB that Tarevender is targeting Eleven again. They’re sending a new Raider to kidnap Eleven and to kill those close to her. Kevin knows that MIB will want to personally take on this mission. So Kevin officially assigns MIB the job of protecting Eleven and to stop the new Raider at all costs. Kevin hands MIB the file and tells him to do what he feels necessarily to perform his duty and fulfill his mission.

MIB accepts the mission and takes the file with his black gloved hand. MIB prepares himself for his mission in a similar fashion that we saw the Raider prepare for his mission in the first story. He puts on his black hooded jacket, black shirt, black pants, and black boots. He opens his locker and pulls out his weapon. We don’t see what it is. As it’s meant to be a surprise for later. He gets on a motorcycle and rides off to begin his mission.

Chapter 2
At a Music Stadium, a local band is playing as the opening for the real band of the show for tonight. Some people are enthused by this band. Others are bored or don’t care as they’re waiting for the band that they really came to see tonight. Outside the Stadium is a big line of fans of the big band still waiting to get inside. Within that line is a young couple BRANDON CRANE (17) and EMILY PERKINS (17). They are becoming impatient with the line. It’s almost time for the show to really start and they’re still way in the middle of the line.

Emily says that she could be at home listening to the band’s latest album while doing her homework and studying rather than wasting her time in line for a band that they’ll most likely be late for. Brandon says that they’ll make it just on time. He believes that a LIVE show is better than listening to the music on the radio. As they talk about this, they’re unaware that the line suddenly got faster. In fact, as soon they finish their conversation, they find that they’re next in line to get in. Brandon hands the ticket person their tickets and they go inside the Stadium.

Brandon and Emily walk into the crowded auditorium just as the announcer steps on stage. The announcer announces that it’s time for the real show to start. This makes everyone cheer, which roars the entire auditorium up with excitement. The announcers tells the audience to give a hand to their band for the night -- THE PRINGLES! Everyone cheers. The Pringles band; leader singer who has a guitar VAL PHOENIX (27), the lead guitarist ROBBY DAVIS (21), the bass player DUKE SIMMONS (25), the drummer JOHN CRISS (25), and the keyboardist RAY MCKAY (29), all get on the stage, which makes everyone go crazy.

Val asks the audience if they’re ready to rock n roll. The entire stadium roars with agreement. Then Val says, “LET’S DO IT!” And the band starts playing a song, which makes everyone cheer. The band’s music is similar to KISS, Metallica, and Guns N Roses. Girls scream and their boyfriends pick them up on their shoulders. Val proceeds to sing the lyrics for their first song, which the audience sings along to. Brandon and Emily are also cheering them on. Despite their lack of enthusiasm when first arriving, they’re now having fun and are excited for this show.

Emily says that she’s going to get some popcorn and a drink. She asks Brandon if he’d like anything. Brandon says that he’ll just share with her. She agrees and leaves. Emily walks out of the auditorium and goes over to the concession stand. She asks for a large popcorn with lots of butter and a large Pepsi. Yeah, Emily is NO Maureen Evans, who was on a diet. Our Emily loves her junk food and has no shame in it. Besides, this is also to accommodate Brandon, who also likes his junk food. No wonder this couple is good together. Emily pays for the popcorn and Pepsi. She thanks the concessioner and takes them with her. She goes back to the auditorium.

Emily and Brandon proceed to dig into the popcorn and share the Pepsi together. They’re a happy couple. As they watch the show, we PAN TO the rest of the audience. Many of the audience members are wearing white masks that symbolizes the band’s themes and songs. One of the mask wearers is none other than -- THE RAIDER. Because he blends in with the others wearing white masks, nobody thinks anything of it. The Raider turns and sees Brandon and Emily together in the middle. He has his eyes on them.

Brandon says that he’s going out for a smoke. Emily says okay. Brandon gets up and walks out. The Raider proceeds to follow him without Brandon’s knowledge of this. Brandon goes outside and proceeds to light a cigarette. As he stands there and smoking his cigarette, we see the dark figure of the Raider watching him. The Raider slowly approaches him from behind. At first Brandon is unaware of his presence. But he suddenly hears his footsteps. Brandon turns around and is instantly stabbed in the chest. Brandon grabs at the Raider in pain. He looks up at his killer as he slides off of him and to the ground. Brandon Crane, boyfriend of Emily, is dead.

Back in the auditorium, the band is playing a slow and soft song. Many fans in the audience have their lighters lit and are waving them around. Couples are holding each other as they swaying to the music. It’s a beautiful moment with the band and their fans. The Raider comes sitting next to Emily, who believes that it’s Brandon in a costume. Emily makes fun of “Brandon” for putting on the costume. But the Raider remains silent. Suddenly, the Pringles play a very loud song. This gets everyone excited. Especially those in the masks. The fans wearing the white masks get up and proceed to dance everywhere in the auditorium.

The Raider grabs Emily and pulls into the dancing scene. They proceed to dance. Emily laughs, telling “Brandon” that she didn’t think he’d wanna dance like this. Suddenly, the Raider stabs Emily in the chest. Emily screams out. But her screaming is masked by the screams of other fans, making it seem like Emily is just cheering the band on. So nobody notices her screaming in pain. Emily backs away from the Raider, staring at her chest wound. Blood is all over her shirt. She looks up to find that the Raider is disappearing into the crowd of white masks.

Emily backs into the stage. She climbs up on the stage. The bodyguards, thinking that she’s gonna grab Val, go to grab her. But then they see that she’s bleeding badly. They finally realize that she’s been stabbed. The band also notice this and stops playing. This makes the fans stop dancing to see what is going on. Emily tries to point at the Raider to everyone. But the Raider has since disappeared and left. Suddenly, Emily drops dead. The bodyguards as well as the band members themselves tries to assist her. But Emily Perkins, girlfriend of Brandon, is dead.

Later the police have arrived. Brandon and Emily’s bodies are being wheeled out. The police are questioning the audience and employees. The Pringles are backstage talking with police. Val is clearly upset over two of his fans being murdered during one of his shows. The police are being led by POLICE CHIEF JIM GORDON (40s), the uncle of Skyler and Eleven and their new legal guardian. He was the late Ben Gordon’s brother. Jim talks to his Deputy ABRAHAM FORD (40s) if the murders remind him of anything. Abraham says that he’s not sure and asks why.

Jim says that he believes that the murders seem very similar to the murders that took place in the previous story. Jim points out to Abraham that the audience say that they had seen a guy in a white mask that looked very much like the white mask that the Raider was wearing in the previous murder spree. Abraham say that it could be just a coincidence. Jim says that he hopes so. He tells Abraham that his nieces have been through enough with the last murder spree and that they don’t need to deal with another one.

Chapter 3
At the BYERS house, WILL BYERS (now 13) is preparing to go to school. He’s all showered and dressed. He eats breakfast alone, as his mother, JOYCE BYERS (40), is just sitting at the couch and spacing out. She’s not doing so well. After Will finishes his breakfast, he walks over to his mother. He hugs and kisses her, telling her that he’ll come home after school. Joyce turns to her youngest child and ask, “Promise?” Will says that he promises. He tells her that “It’s over” and that she doesn’t have to be afraid to lose him. He reminds his mother that Tyler and Nancy are dead. They can’t hurt him anymore or his friends.

Will tells his mother that he loves her and that he’ll see her after school. Will leaves and rides his bike off to school. Joyce just sits on the couch by herself. She pulls out a picture of her late older son, Jonathan Byers, killed by Tyler in the previous story. She touches his face on the picture. She begins to cry and says, “My baby. Why did they take my baby?” She holds the picture in a hugging way. She’s clearly not over Jonathan’s dead after a year. Joyce lays down on the couch and cries herself to sleep with the picture of Jonathan.

At Clearwood Middle School, Will arrives to join his group; JANE “ELEVEN” GORDON (now wearing a curly hair wig), MIKE WHEELER, DUSTIN HENDERSON, and LUCAS SINCLAIR (All 13). Mike and Eleven are now a couple as they are openly holding hands in front of everyone. They all say hi to Will as he joins them. They asks him how he’s doing. Will sadly says that he’s doing okay. Realizing that he’s really not okay, Eleven asks if it’s his mother. Will sadly nods, confirming that his mother is the issue. Eleven shows sorrow over this. Apart of her feels guilty over this, as it was Tarevender targeting her that led to Jonathan’s murder.

In ENGLISH CLASS, which is taught by MELISSA HOWARD (38), the Clearwood Six (minus Skyler as she’s in high school) take their seats. Will takes a seat and notice that a new person is sitting at a desk that is usually empty. He turns to the new student. It’s a beautiful brunette girl named JAMIE LLOYD (13). Jamie notices him staring at her and smiles at him. Will smiles back. At the same time, Melissa introduces Jamie to the class. She asks Jamie to come up to the front. As Jamie walks to the front, she gives Will a cute smile, indicating that she already likes him.

Jamie comes up to the front of the class. Melissa asks her to tell the class about herself. Jamie reveals that she’s from Haddonfield, Illinois. This gets everyone’s attention, as everyone knows about the legend of Michael Myers. Upon realizing her name, our survivors realize, as do we, that Jamie Lloyd is the niece of Michael Myers. Will is shocked. He has heard about her but never thought he’d ever meet her. Jamie says that she moved here to escape from the legend that her blood is involved with in the Halloween murders.

Upon hearing this and being a survivor himself, who has lost a brother, Will is vowing to do whatever he can to protect Jamie and make her feel safe in Clearwood. Later, Eleven is visiting her guidance counselor, LAURA SHRINER (45). Laura asks Eleven how she’s been lately. Eleven tells her that she’s much better. She reveals that she’s closer to her sister and that her relationship with Mike has gotten stronger since they survived the murders. Laura says that she’s been making great progress. Laura asks how she’s doing with her Aunt and Uncle. Eleven says that things are going great with them. They’re taking good care of her.

Eleven does admit that she misses both her adoptive parents and her real father. Laura reminds Eleven that she never spoke much about her real father. Eleven tells Laura that her real father, Negan, was a killer who redeemed himself in order to protect her from his own people. Eleven tells her that Negan’s organization wanted to convert her into one of them. But Negan killed Tyler and himself to stop it. Eleven declares that Negan became a good man and father by everything he did in the previous story, despite being a brutal killer himself who murdered her biological mother. It’s clear that Eleven thinks highly of Negan, who she still loves and mourns.

Chapter 4
At Clearwood High School, we are reintroduced to SKYLER GORDON (17). She’s with her group of friends; VERONICA CARTER, her girlfriend NICOLE PRICE (17), Veronica’s twin brother JEFF CARTER (17), his girlfriend ANNA MOSS (17), and Skyler’s new boyfriend JOHN BRAYDEN (17). John says how crazy it was that their friends Brandon and Emily were killed last night at The Pringles concert. Skyler says that she’s horrified by this as a murder spree survivor. Veronica and Jeff says that they’re upset as it still haunts them that their late cousins, Tyler and Nancy, were responsible for the murders last year.

Skyler reminds them that they are still her friends despite their cousins. Veronica and Jeff thanks her for saying this. The group is joined by their friend ALEX HUGHES (17). They asks him where he’s been all day. Alex lies and says that he overslept. They notice that he has a gnarly bruise on his face. They ask him about the bruise. Alex lies and says that he fell down and that it’s no big deal. But they know that he’s lying. John asks him if “he” hit him again. Who is he? Alex says that everything is fine. But his friends pressure him about this, which upsets Alex.

John threatens to kick “his ass” for what he’s done to Alex. But Alex tells him no. Alex says that he loves “him” and doesn’t want to lose “him.” This reveals that Alex is gay and in an abusive relationship with his much older boyfriend. Skyler tells him that “he” doesn’t really love him if that is how he treats him. Veronica tells Alex that he deserves better than that and that his boyfriend isn’t worth it. Alex gets pissed and says, “You don’t know anything. Leave me alone!” Alex walks away from his group. This saddens them. But they know that he’s just afraid.

After school, Skyler’s group is walking home together. Alex has since rejoined them. Skyler and John are holding hands. Alex is quiet. Veronica, Nicole, Jeff, and Anna are doing most of the talking. They’re talking about having a party at the Carter house sometime this weekend. Skyler is very skeptical, remembering the last time that she attended a party at the Carter house and how it ended; Ron’s murder and the later murders of Jonathan, Barb, and Patrick. As they continue to walk together, they hear a horn honking at them. They turn to look across the street.

They see an older guy in the car. Alex is somewhat scare when he realizes who this is. His friends tell him that he doesn’t have to go with him if he doesn’t want to. Alex says no and that it’s fine. John says if he hurts him again that he’ll kick his ass. Alex says that everything is okay and walks across the street to the car. Alex gets into the car and they drive off. Skyler and her friends are disgusted by Alex’s boyfriend. Anna says that she feels so sad for Alex and how she hopes that he’s able to escape from him and find someone better. The others agree.

In the car, we meet Alex’s abusive and much older boyfriend DONALD NEWTON (21). Donald looks at Alex’s face, which still contains the very bruise that he put on him. Donald berates him for not covering it up. Alex says that he’s sorry. Donald asks him if he’s trying to get him into trouble with the police. Alex denies this and tells him that he would never do anything to make him mad. Donald slaps Alex across the face and shouts at him. Donald says that Alex pisses him off everyday. Donald calls Alex a stupid fag who has been showing him disrespect and been disobeying him everyday. This makes Alex cry. Donald sees this and stops the car.

Donald turns to Alex, using his finger to have Alex face him. Donald says that he’s sorry for hurting him. Donald tells Alex that he loves him but that Alex needs to listen and obey him. Donald says that he doesn’t like hitting Alex but that he (Alex) makes him do it. Alex says that he’s sorry for making Donald mad. Donald kisses Alex. He’s a typical abusive boyfriend, putting victim-blaming on the abused victim. Donald smiles and says, “You’re lucky that I love. Because nobody else would love you like I do.” Alex tells Donald that he loves him, too.

It’s clear that Donald is the dominate one of the couple. Alex is the weak, abused, and blamed victim, who lets Donald abuse him. Donald and Alex proceed to make out. Alex tries to kiss Donald romantically. But Donald kisses Alex very aggressively and dominating. Even though Alex wants the affection, it appears that Donald could rape him at any moment. As Donald and Alex make out in the car, we PAN AWAY from them to Donald’s side mirror. In the reflection of the mirror, we see -- THE RAIDER -- standing and watching the couple making out in the car. After watching for a moment, the Raider walks away off screen.

Chapter 5
We open in the very same scene at the very end of the previous story. Eleven and Mike are romantically walking together at the school field and holding hands. Mike gives his girlfriend a look over, including her wig. Mike tells Eleven how pretty she is. But he also states that he loved her even when she didn’t have hair. This makes Eleven smile, realizing that she is truly beautiful even without hair. Mike and Eleven kiss. As they kiss, we PAN AWAY from them to find -- MIB watching them in the distance. This explains why he was present at the end of the previous story. This is when MIB sees Eleven for the first time since he began his mission to protect her.

Meanwhile, we find Will, Dustin, and Lucas riding their bikes back to their homes. Will informs them that he must go home right away as not to upset his already distraught mother. Understanding this, Dustin and Lucas tells Will that they’ll see him tomorrow. Will says goodbye to his friends and rides away from them. Lucas says that he’s gotta get home to help his parents out. So he rides off. Dustin is now alone and riding his bike through the deserted road. Dustin makes a turn to another road, which is empty and long.

As Dustin rides through the road, he sees somebody in the middle of the road. From behind the person, we find that the person is wearing all black, covering their entire body. The person turns around to reveal themselves as -- THE RAIDER. Recognizing this, Dustin panics and swerves his bike off the road. Dustin and his bike falls to the ground. Dustin gets up and sees that the Raider is coming for him. Dustin proceeds to run away in the woods. The Raider follows closely behind him. But Dustin runs faster.

Dustin finds a tree and hides behind it. He is hyperventilating. He catches his breath before doing anything else. He peeks out from behind the tree to take a look. He scans through the woods. But he cannot see anything. The Raider is nowhere to be found. He turns around only to find the Raider. Dustin attempts to runaway. But the Raider swings a bat over his head. Dustin is knocked unconscious and falls to the ground. The Raider stares at the knocked out Dustin for a moment. Then the Raider grabs his legs and drags him out of the woods.

Later that night, Eleven walks Mike home. Mike says that he wishes that he could have walked her home. Eleven smiles and says that she’ll be fine. They kiss each other goodnight. Mike tells Eleven that he loves her and she says that she loves him, too. Mike goes inside and Eleven proceeds to walk home. As Eleven walks off, we PAN TO -- MIB riding his motorcycle, carefully following her. We TRANSITION TO -- Sometime later, Eleven is still walking home. She’s all alone in a dark and deserted road. In a closeby distance, we see MIB on his motorcycle, which Eleven still doesn’t notice.

Suddenly, Eleven is snatched by a man. He pulls her into the bushes. Eleven is scared when she notices three grown men in their early twenties taunting her. They’re giving her the “eye.” They tell her that she’s a pretty little thing. They laugh as they make sexual comments towards her. Eleven realizes what they plan on doing to her. Eleven begs them to let her go. But they refuse. They proceed to rip her clothes off. Eleven starts screaming for help. But the leader smacks her. He tells her to shut up or he’ll kill her. Eleven begins to cry. She feels helpless.

The Rapists say that they’re gonna have some fun with her. Suddenly, a voice says, “You’re not gonna have any fun at all.” The three Rapists and Eleven turn to see -- MIB. He tells the Rapists that they’ll have her after they’ve killed him. The three Rapists, being the young, stupid, and cocky guys that they are, decides to charge at him. But MIB pulls out a shotgun and starts shooting. At first, he fires a few warning shots. But it’s clear that this does not faze the three rapists. So he shoots the third rapist in the chest, killing him. The other two still charges at him.

MIB fires a few more warning shots again. But then he’s forced to shoot the second rapist, killing him. Now it’s just the leader. He tries to shoot but he has ran out of bullets. Realizing that the Leader is not gonna stand down, MIB must fight him. As soon as the Leader nearly comes in contact with him, MIB slams the shotgun against his face. This hurts the Leader. But it leads to a fight between MIB and the Leader. It’s clear that despite his toughness, the Leader is NO MATCH to MIB, who is much older, experienced, and tough as fuck compared to him.

Eleven watches this in shock. Not only was she close to being raped. But some dark stranger comes out of nowhere and saves her. But why? Who is this tall dark stranger? And why would he risk his life to save her? As Eleven watches this man fight for her, she is reminded of another person who risked his life to save her when she was in danger; Her late father Negan. MIB is showing the same kind of compassion, motivation, and dedication to save her like Negan. This means to Eleven that MIB is someone who must or wishes to protect for some reason. But why?

Eventually, MIB gets the major upper hand, using the shotgun to bash the Lead Rapist’s head. The Lead Rapist falls to the ground. But MIB continues to bash his head with the shotgun. The Lead Rapist is dead. MIB turns to Eleven, who in a state of shock. Before they can say anything to each other, Eleven faints. MIB walks over to her and picks her up. MIB places Eleven safely on his motorcycle and rides her back home. When they get to the GORDON house, MIB carries Eleven and places her on the porch. He rings the doorbell and runs off.

The door opens and we find BARBARA GORDON (40s), Eleven’s Aunt, stepping out. She is shocked to see her niece lying there like this. She picks her up and brings her inside. We PAN AWAY to find MIB standing in the dark background across the street. Now that he has seen that Eleven is safe and sound inside her house, he walks off screen.

Chapter 6
The next day at school, Eleven joins her group. Mike runs up to her and hugs her. He tells her how worried he was about her after hearing about last night. Mike asks her what happened. Eleven says that she can’t really explain much as she was too shocked over it. But Eleven is able to explain that some man saved her from the bad men. Mike says that he is just glad that Eleven is okay. They kiss each other. Will and Lucas joins them and asks them if they have seen Dustin. Mike and Eleven confirm that they haven’t seen him. Mike assumes that maybe Dustin is either sick or has overslept.

The others agree with this explanation and thinks nothing of their friend’s absence. Will and Lucas tells Eleven that they heard about what happened last night. They ask her if she’s okay. Eleven says that she is okay. She says that she is just grateful that the stranger came to her rescue. Will, Lucas, and Mike hug her with relief that she’s okay. After the hug, they walk inside the school together. Will says that he hopes that Jamie is here today. Lucas teases Will over his crush on Jamie. Eleven thinks that it’s cute. Eleven advices Will to talk to Jamie. Mike agrees and encourages him as well. Much like Will had encouraged him in the previous story.

In English class, Melissa is asking her students to write an essay about their biggest impact on life so far. She uses examples such as a friend that they’ve met, a moment in life that was very big, or a group of things that is related. Eleven immediately thinks about Mike and Negan. But she also thinks about Skyler, her fallen friends, and Mike’s friends. Each example is the exact description of her experiences from the previous story. Eleven wants to write her story about the previous story. Meanwhile, Will notices Jamie at her desk. They turn to each other smile.

In a DARK UNKNOWN LOCATION, we find Dustin still unconscious. He regains consciousness. We find that he’s chained to the flood. He looks around his surroundings. He finds himself in a cafeteria. He recognize this particular cafeteria. It’s the destoryed abandoned school from the previous story. Although, burnted and most walls destroyed by the fire, the school surprisingly still stands. He calls out for help. But nobody comes to his rescue. Dustin notices a camera recording him on the wall. From an unknown location, most likely in another location far away, we see an uncovered hand holding a cellphone, which is showing the LIVE feed of Dustin. This means that an unmasked/out of costume Raider is watching him from another location.

At the Guidance Counselor’s office, a crying Eleven is talking to Laura about the events of last night. Laura rubs her leg in a motherly way, as if to comfort her. Eleven tells her about the men who attacked her and how they tried to rape her. She then mentions the man who saved her. Laura asks her if she saw the man’s face. Eleven says that she did not. But that he was very much like her real father by how he was so devoted in protecting her. Laura says that maybe the man just reminded her of Negan. Eleven agrees that this was the case. He was tall, big, tough, and deadly like Negan. To Eleven this is a void being filled over his loss.

Laura tells Eleven that she had two kids. Eleven asks about them. Laura says that her daughter was hanging out with her friends one night. Her brother went to go help her with something. But their friends turned on them and killed them both. Eleven says that she’s sorry to hear that. Laura says that she knows what Eleven is going through. Ever since her children were killed, every child she has met would remind her of them and that they would often fill the void. Laura even implies that Eleven reminds her of her daughter. This makes Eleven smile. It’s clear that Laura is very motherly towards her as a result.

At the cafeteria, Will walks over to Jamie, who is sitting alone at a table, and asks her if he can sit with her. Jamie smiles and says sure. Will sits with her. He introduces himself to her. Jamie introduces herself to him. Will says that he understands what it’s like to be a survivor. He tells her about the events of the previous story, which includes the murder of his brother and how it has affected him and his mother. Jamie automatically realize their connection to each other as survivors, which explains their immediate attraction to each other. Jamie tells Will about her first foster sister, Rachel Carruthers, who was killed by her Uncle Michael in Halloween 5.

NOTE: The ending of Halloween 5 is different in this version. Jamie is NOT kidnapped by the cult. In my version, Michael was killed by an angry parent and a mob during the police station massacre at the end of Halloween 5. So Jamie is never kidnapped and lives with a new family.

Will and Jamie share each other's experiences and what they had to do to get over them. Jamie explains that she is still haunted by her Uncle. That even though Michael Myers is dead, that she can still see him everywhere. Every Halloween, no matter where she’s at, he would appear everywhere in front of her. As a result, she is scared and worried that she will never escape from him even in the aftermath of his death. Will takes her hand and tells her that he’ll be right there with her to fight this with her. Jamie smiles. She has found the right person to help through this.

Chapter 7
At the location where Eleven was attacked and rescued, Jim and his Deputies are investigating. The Rapists’ bodies are being wheeled out. Jim has no sympathy for them due to them trying to rape his niece. Jim’s TOP DEPUTY -- ABRAHAM FORD (40s) approaches and asks if these are the men who attacked Eleven. Jim confirms this. Abraham looks at the bodies being wheeled off and says that they deserved this. He then says that they should find the man who killed them and to give him a medal for saving a little girl. Jim chuckles at this comment.

Eleven, Mike, Will, and Lucas arrive at Dustin’s house. They knock at the front door. Dustin’s mother, who we remember was attacked by the Raider but survived in the previous story, opens the door and says hello to the kids. They ask if Dustin is home. But Mrs. Henderson says that she thought that he was with them. She tells them that she hasn’t seen him since yesterday. This worries the kids. Mrs. Henderson asks the kids to tell Dustin to come home if they see him, as she’s worried about him. The kids say that they will. They leave.

The group becomes worried. Where is Dustin? Suddenly, as they’re walking on the sidewalk, Skyler drives up to them. She is scared and panicking. She tells them to get in the car. The confused kids jump in. Eleven asks Skyler what is wrong. Skyler shows them a video that was sent to her on her phone. It’s a video of Dustin chained to the floor. The Raider appears on the screen. This frightens the kids, especially Eleven. The Raider tells them that if they want to see their friend alive again, then they are to come to the same school where they killed Tyler and Nancy Carter. But that they must come alone. The video goes black.

Eleven says that they need to save Dustin. They all agree. Skyler says that they will do this together. They should fight instead of running and hiding from the Raider this time. They all agree. Skyler opens her glove compartment to reveal that she still has the gun that she used to kill Nancy in the previous story. She checks to see if it’s loaded, which it is. Skyler says, “Lets go get Dustin.” They drive off. We find not far from them is MIB riding his motorcycle. He carefully follows them without being seen by them. Yeah, they’re not doing this alone.

The Clearwood Six (minus Dustin) arrive at the abandoned school from the previous story. They jump out of Skyler’s car and rush inside the school. Immediately after they’ve gone inside, we find MIB pulling into the school parking lot. He knows that something is up. He gets off of his motorcycle and opens his large compartment. He goes to pull out his secret main weapon. But before we can see what this weapon is, we CUT TO -- The Clearwood Six looking around the school for Dustin. They call out to Dustin. Hearing them, he shouts for help. They realize that he’s in the cafeteria. They run into the cafeteria and finds him chained to the floor.

They run up to their friend and ask him if he’s okay. Skyler asks him how to unlock the chains. Dustin tells them that the Raider left a key for them at the table. Eleven runs over to the table and takes the key. She gives it to Skyler, who proceeds to unlock the chains. Dustin is freed. They help him up and the Clearwood Six run away from the cafeteria. But before they can make it to the main entrance, The Raider appears and attacks them. They decide to fight back. But he’s much stronger than all of them. He throws them around. Frustrated, Lucas charges the Raider to the wall. As he and the Raider fight, Lucas tells his friends to run without him.

Skyler tells him that she’s not leaving him. Suddenly, the Raider stabs Lucas in the stomach. Lucas screams out. Skyler runs over and pulls the Raider off of him. The Raider smacks Skyler. He goes to attack her. But the injured Lucas fights back. Injured and knowing that he’ll die, Lucas tells his friends to just leave him. Realizing that he won’t survived, the sadden and horrified Clearwood Six runs away. The Raider stabs Lucas multiple times in the chest. Lucas Sinclair, the sixth ranking survivor of Clearwood, is dead.

The Clearwood Five run out of the school. But before they can get to Skyler’s car, they stop when they see -- MIB walking towards them. Eleven recognizes him as the man who saved her last night. Eleven asks him who he is. MIB pulls out his main secret weapon -- LUCILLE. Wait, what?!! If he has Lucille, then -- MIB removes his hood and reveals himself to be -- A very much ALIVE but SCARRED -- NEGAN! The Clearwood Five is shocked to see their hero, who they thought to be dead, alive and standing there in front of them. Eleven quietly says, “Daddy?”

Negan says, “GET DOWN! MOVE!” The Clearwood Five move and duck as Negan charges The Raider, who just came out of the school. Using his own bat, the Raider blocks Negan’s attempts to bash his head. The two proceed to have a bat fight. Boy, don’t you miss this? The Clearwood Five stands by in shock. How is Negan still alive? The Raider pushes Negan, who falls to the ground. The Raider goes to bash Negan. But Eleven thinks quickly and grabs a piece of wood near by. She slams it over the Raider’s head. Eleven and Mike help Negan up.

As the kids run with Negan, Skyler shoots the Raider in the head. But, obviously, the mask was built to resists gunshots. But he’s still affected by it. She uses this as an opportunity to steal his keys. They all run to a white van, which belongs to the Raider. Eleven and Mike help Negan into the back. Will and Dustin joins them in the back. Skyler goes to the driver’s seat and starts the van. The Raider recovers and chases them. Just as the Raider reaches the driver’s door, Skyler hits the gas, driving off away from the Raider. They have escaped from the Raider. But sadly, they have lost one of their own -- Lucas Sinclair.

Chapter 8
Alex is driving around town in an empty road in the backwoods. He sees something very familiar to him. It’s Donald’s car parked with other cars. Curious and suspicious, Alex parks his car and gets out. He hears people talking, yelling, laughing, and making other noises in the woods. He quietly walks into the woods and follows the noise. In a big open area, Alex sees Donald and a gang, which Donald himself leads, attacking one of their enemies. Donald is brutally beating up this guy without mercy. Alex is horrified to learn that his boyfriend is a gang member.

Donald smiles evilly as he takes pleasure in hurting another person. He knocks out his victim and takes his wallet. As he walks away from his unconscious victim, he spits at him and tells him that he’s lucky that he (Donald) didn’t kill him. Donald and his gang laugh. A horrified Alex cannot take it any longer. He runs away and goes back into his car. He drives off. As he’s driving, he begins to cry. Alex asks himself why Donald would be like this. Alex comes to realize that Donald is more an just an abusive asshole boyfriend. He’s a very bad person period.

Back at the white van, Skyler pulls into the woods and parks in the middle of the woods. The Clearwood Five and Negan walk out of the van. Eleven asks Negan how he’s alive after the explosion. Negan begins to explain and the Clearwood Five listen. We cut to a FLASHBACK -- Negan has Tyler in a hold. He asks for Skyler and Mike to take care of Eleven. They pull Eleven out of the school. Negan lights the lighter and the school explodes.The survivors are at the front of the school. But on the other side at the back of the school is -- A GROUP SURFACKS.

Negan explains that a spy for Surfack within Tarevender had reported that Negan had betrayed them to protect Eleven. So upon learning their location by intercepting the call from Governor to the Raider, Kevin sent a group to the school. Wearing protective suits, the group of Surfacks ran into the flaming school. They found Negan and extinguished the fire off of him. They pulled him out and brought him back to Surfack. Kevin ordered the Surfack doctors to work on Negan. He nearly didn’t make it. But he miraculously survived due to Surfack’s devotion to saving him.

Upon recovering, Negan was given surgery to recover most of his appearance. And after that, Negan was sworn-in as a Surfack. He decided with Eleven supposedly safe, he would dedicate his life to stopping Tarevender as he had the most information on them. After the FLASHBACK ends, Eleven asks her father why he never contacted her and told her that he was okay. Negan explains that he felt that she needed to move on and have a real family instead of him. He apologizes to her but tells her that he was doing what he thought was best for her.

Eleven forgives her father and hugs him. The rest of the Clearwood Five hugs Negan. They tell him that they’re glad that he’s back with them. Negan smiles and says that he’s glad to be back with them, too. Skyler asks what they should do now that the Raider is back to get them again. Negan says that like last time, they’re going to have to hide out. Will is concerned about his mother. Negan says that they cannot go home because the Raider will certainly target their families again in hopes of luring them. They cannot take anymore risks. This upsets the kids, knowing that their families are at risk.

Later that evening, Donald returns home to his apartment. He finds Alex there. Donald asks him what he’s doing here. Alex says that he came to confront him. Donald tells him to watch his words before he gets a beating. Alex stands up and gets in Donald’s face. Alex says that he’s a criminal and a horrible person. Donald gives him a final warning, telling him that he better watch himself. Alex tells Donald that he saw him beating up a guy earlier. Donald is surprised by this. But Alex tells Donald that he’s nothing but a horrible waste of a human being. Alex tells him that he’s leaving him for good.

As a result, Donald slaps Alex across the face. Donald grabs Alex and pulls him into the bedroom. He throws Alex onto the bed. Donald tells Alex that he belongs to him and that he’s his bitch. Donald tells Alex that he’s gonna do what men do their bitches. Donald pulls Alex’s clothes off. Alex begs him to stop. But Donald refuses. He pulls his own pants off. He sticks it in Alex’s ass and proceeds to rape him. Alex screams and cries. The pain and fear he’s inflicting on his boyfriend is giving Donald more pleasure. He also pulls on Alex’s hair while doing this.

Alex proceeds to sob and feel hopeless. Donald finishes the deed. He puts his pants back on and tells Alex that he will never leave him. Donald says that if Alex tries anything, he will find him and he will punish him so badly that he cannot imagine the pain he will feel. Donald tells Alex that, “You’re mine, bitch!” He slaps him before leaving. Alex cries and feels terrible. His boyfriend has just raped him. He is done with him for good. He needs to escape from him.

Chapter 9
At the abandoned school, Jim and Abraham arrive as Lucas’s body is being wheeled out. Jim and Abraham are upset by this. From the looks of things, not only is Lucas’s murder related to the murders in Chapter 2, but also related to the previous story’s murder spree. Jim is horrified by this idea. Abraham informs Jim that Dustin's mother, Will’s mother, and Mike’s parents have reported them missing. Jim tells Abraham that Barbara (Jim’s wife) has told him that the girls (Eleven and Skyler) have not come home from school yet. Jim and Abraham are beginning to believe that Lucas’s murder is related. Jim declares that, “It’s happening again.”

At the middle school, Melissa is watching the news on her phone. The news is reporting that Clearwood Murder Spree Survivor Lucas Sinclair was murdered in the very same school where the killers responsible for the murders had died. The news announces that the other Clearwood Survivors are also missing. Melissa becomes very worried. She was friends with Andrew, Lorraine, and Scott when she was a teenager herself before Scott’s turn to the dark side to Tarevender. She hears a noise coming from the hallway. She steps out into the hallway and asks who is out there. She gets no response. So she walks through the hall and looks around.

As she looks around, we see the Raider walking past her from behind and walking into her classroom. Melissa doesn’t seem to find anything out of the ordinary. So she walks back into her classroom. She walks back to her to her desk. As she’s looking paperwork, The Raider comes out of the closet that he was hiding in. He sneaks up on Melissa, who does not feel his presence. The Raider grabs Melissa and throws her to the wall. She is horrified when she sees him. She asks him what he wants from her. The Raider asks where the Clearwood Five is.

But Melissa says that she doesn’t know and says that she thought that he had them. But the Raider says that they escaped from him. The Raider reminds her of her connections to the late fallen Tarevenders (Scott, Nancy, and Tyler) and to the Clearwood Five. The Raider says that he figured that they’d come to her for help due to her own knowledge as a survivor. But Melissa says that she doesn’t know where they’re at. She doesn’t know anything. This frustrates the Raider. He realizes that Melissa is a dead end and that he must eliminate her as a threat.

The Raider apologizes to her for what he’s about to do to her. He stabs Melissa in the chest. She screams out and he drops her. Melissa cries in fear. She looks up at the Raider, who lifts his mask up. But before we can see who he is, we cut to Melissa’s reaction to the Raider’s identity. Melissa gasps in shock and horror. Melissa knows who the Raider is. She says, “No. You can’t be.” The Raider puts his mask back on and stabs Melissa in the head. Melissa Howard, a former survivor of the Honor stories and the Clearwood Five’s teacher, is dead.

At the Byers house, we find a distraught and nervous Joyce sitting on the couch and crying. She is praying that her baby (Will) comes back home safe and sound to her. She’s even more of a mess than she was earlier when she was just mourning Jonathan. But now she’s even worse with Will being missing. The thought of something bad happening to Will is getting to Joyce. The doorbell rings. Joyce gets up and goes over to the door. However, before she can even open the door -- THE RAIDER BURSTS IN THROUGH THE DOOR.

The Raider goes to punch Joyce. But she ducks. Joyce tries to sneak past him as she ducks. But he is smart and elbows her in the side, which makes her fall to the floor. This is something that happened with Sidney in her first attack in the original movie. The Raider gets on top of Joyce and tries to stab her. But Joyce is holding his wrist, preventing him from stabbing her. The Raider grabs her hair and slams her head on the hard floor. Joyce becomes disoriented. The Raider stabs her in the chest multiple times. Joyce Byers, mother of Will and Jonathan, is dead.

The Raider looks around the house for Will or any of the other Clearwood Five. But he cannot find anyone. He texts his partner and tells him that nobody is at the Byers house. Meanwhile, at the Gordon house, both Jim and Barbara are on their knees, much like Jim’s late brother and sister-in-law. The Raider, most likely the partner, is interrogating the Gordons for the Clearwood Five’s whereabouts. But neither know anything but they wouldn’t tell him even if they did know anything. The Raider says that he has a plan. He needs Jim alive. But he doesn’t need Baraba.

The Raider grabs a meat cleaver and slams it into Barbara's head. Jim screams upon witnessing his wife being murdered. The Raider pulls the cleaver out of her head. Barbara’s body falls to the floor. Barbara Gordon, wife of Jim and aunt of Skyler and Eleven, is dead. Jim goes to attack the Raider. But he backhands him across the face, making him fall to the floor. The Raider says that he needs Jim alive to use him against the Clearwood Five. So he’s not going to kill him just yet. The Raider kicks Jim in the head and knocks Jim unconscious.

In an unknown location, the two Raiders meet each other. They unmask themselves. But we do not see their faces. The younger Raider asks the older Raider, who is clearly the boss, if they should try the Wheeler’s house. The older Raider says no, as it’s obvious that Negan is hiding them again. The younger Raider asks what they should do. The older Raider says that it’s time for Skyler to reunite with her friends and to bring them into the game. The Raiders shall use Skyler’s friends as bait.

Chapter 10
Back at the woods, Negan and the Clearwood Five are hanging out. Will is thinking about both his mother and Jamie. Suddenly, they hear noises from within the trees and bushes. They panic. Negan pulls out Lucille and slowly approaches the trees and bushes. Somebody pops out, nearly getting hit by the bat -- IT’S JAMIE. Will asks her what she’s doing here. Jamie tells him that she was worried about him. Suspicious of her, they ask her how she found them. Jamie tells them that when Will gave her his number earlier, she had her foster brother hack into an app that would track his phone after she heard about them going missing.

This makes Will smile. Jamie was willing to risk her life for him. Will approaches her and they hug each other. Will kisses Jamie. This makes Jamie smile and she tells him that she’s glad that he did that. Will says that he’s glad that he did, too. Jamie joins the group in hiding now. Skyler gets a phone call from her boyfriend, John (remember him?). John, Veronica, Jeff, Nicole, Anna, and Alex are together. They heard about them going missing. John asks Skyler where she’s at. Negan at first refuses to let them know, in fear that one of them is the Raider.

But John insists that he’s not the Raider and that he’s worried about Skyler. Negan is very skeptical about this. But Skyler believes John. She tells Negan that if one of them is the Raider, then like last time, they’ll kill them. Eleven, Mike, Will, and Dustin agree. Negan relents and tells her that her friends can join them as long as they swear loyalty to not just them but to Surfack. This is agreed upon by everyone. So Skyler’s friends are going to join them in hiding. About half an hour later, John, Veronica, Jeff, Nicole, Anna, and Alex arrive together.

Skyler hugs John and their friends. She notices Alex’s appearance, which screams “Rape.” Realizing what was done to him, Skyler hugs him. Alex tells her that he’s left Donald and doesn’t want to see him anymore. Skyler says that is great. John, Veronica, Jeff, Nicole, Anna, and Alex introduce themselves to Negan. Veronica and Jeff admit to being Carters. But that they want to stop the people (Tarevender) who made their cousins evil. They don’t blame Negan or Skyler for killing Tyler and Nancy. They blame Tarevender for brainwashing them. Negan accepts them.

Negan asks them if they told anyone where they were going. John, Veronica, Jeff, Nicole, Anna, and Alex says that they did not. They came up with cover stories to tell their families. So nobody knows where they’re truly at. Negan says that is good. He claims that their knowledge as being relatives of survivors and their connection to the Clearwood Five, that they have a better chance at defeating the Raider with this group. Skyler agrees. John vows to kill anyone who threatens to hurt Skyler and Eleven. John pulls his knife and says that he’ll cut the Raider up with his knife.

Suddenly, the entire group of main characters hears whistling all around them. They look around. Dozens of men in black surround them in the woods. They have no idea who these people are. Negan confirms that these are NOT Tarevenders. But as the men grow bigger in size, Alex suddenly recognizes them. He is horrified when he realizes that these men are -- DONALD’S GANG. Alex says that he needs to get out here. The gang points their guns at the group. Negan pulls out his bat. But the men shoot at him as a warning shot.

The gang tells Negan to throw his bat to them. Not wanting to risk anyone’s lives, Negan complies and throws the bat to them. One of the men takes the bat. The gang tells the group to get on their knees. The entire cast of main characters does just that. The kneeling lineup; Negan, Skyler, Eleven, Mike, Will, Jamie, Dustin, John, Veronica, Nicole, Jeff, Anna, and Alex. Yes, you know where I’m going with this. It’s very similar to the Negan scene in The Walking Dead Season 6 finale/Season 7 premiere.

Donald comes out of the darkness of the woods. He’s wearing all black. Very similar to Negan himself. But without the black leather jacket. He’s wearing a black sweatshirt jacket. He’s smiling that same evil smile that he had earlier when he was beating up his victim earlier. He approaches Alex and tells him, “You thought you could escape from me. But I told you that I’d come and find you.” Alex asks him how he did find him. Donald tells him that he put a tracking device on his car. He did this just for this occasion; should Alex leave him and runaway.

Donald tells Alex that he’s going to punish him in such a horrible way like he promised him that he would. Alex toughens up and asks him if he’s going to rape and beat him. Donald says no. That no longer works. Alex asks if he’s going to kill him. Donald says that he’s going to kill him inside. But not physically. Donald tells Alex that he wants Alex to live with the pain that he killed someone else. Alex says that he will not kill anyone but him (Donald). Donald laughs and tells him that he (Donald) will kill one of his friends and will make Alex live with the guilt.

Alex realizes what this means. Alex begs him to hurt him instead. But Donald says that he is. He orders one of his men to hold Alex back. The gang pulls Alex back. Donald is handed Lucille by one of his men. Donald’s man tells him that Negan had the bat. Donald observes the bat and admires it. Donald says that he likes it and shall use it. Donald walks back and forth in front of the group and tells them that he has nothing personal against them. But Alex has defied him for the last time. So one of them is going to pay the price for Alex disrespecting and disobeying him.

Donald tells them that he must choose one of these “lucky” people to be sacrificed for the good of his relationship. So Donald looks at each person. He comes to Jamie. He recognizes her as the niece of Michael Myers. Donald tells Jamie that he’s aware of her pain and misery from Michael. So he suggests that he should put her out of misery by taking her out. But Will suddenly screams at him. He tries to charge at him. But Donald’s gang grabs him and pulls him back. As he’s brought back into the line, Will begs Donald not to kill Jamie.

Donald laughs and says that is so “adorable” of Will to save the girl that he loves. But Donald tells them not to do that again. He says that he will “Shut that shit down!” no exceptions. But he says that this one is free since it’s an emotional moment and that he understands their feelings about this. So Donald takes a look at them all. He sighs and says that he just cannot decide. But as Donald thinks, it finally hits him. Donald tells the group that he has an idea.

Donald approaches them and starts playing “Eenie, Meenie, Miny, Mo” with them.


 * EENIE - Negan
 * MEENIE - Skyler
 * MINY - Eleven
 * MO - Mike
 * CATCH - Will
 * A - Jamie
 * TIGER - Dustin
 * BY - John
 * HIS - Veronica
 * TOE - Nicole
 * IF - Jeff
 * HE - Anna
 * HOLLERS - Jeff
 * LET - Nicole
 * HIM - Veronica
 * GO - John
 * MY - Dustin
 * MOTHER - Jamie
 * TOLD - Will
 * ME - Mike
 * TO - Eleven
 * PICK - Skyler
 * THE - Negan
 * VERY - Skyler
 * BEST - Eleven (Yay, she got the best)
 * ONE - Mike
 * AND - Will
 * YOU - Jamie
 * ARE - Dustin
 * POINTS AT NEGAN
 * POINTS AT SKYLER
 * POINTS AT ELEVEN
 * POINTS AT MIKE
 * POINTS AT WILL
 * POINTS AT JAMIE
 * POINTS AT DUSTIN
 * POINTS AT JOHN
 * POINTS AT VERONICA
 * POINTS AT NICOLE
 * POINTS AT JEFF
 * POINTS AT ANNA

Through the POINT OF VIEW of DONALD’S CHOSEN VICTIM, we see Donald approaches us and points Lucille at us. Donald declares “IT!” Donald then tells his gang that, “If anybody moves, anybody says anything, cut the Myers girl up (Jamie) and feed her to her little boyfriend (Will). And then we'll start. You can blink, you can breathe, you can cry. Hell, you’re all gonna be doing that.”

DONALD SLAMS LUCILLE DOWN AT US. Our POV/UNIDENTIFIED VICTIM goes down. Though disoriented and blood filling the screen up, our POV/Victim looks up at Donald, who is surprised to see us/his victim still up. Donald admires this and says, “Look at that! Taking it like a champ.” Before we/the victim has a chance to say anything, Donald continues to bash us/his victim over the head.

The SCREEN GOES BLACK. Who did Donald kill? Negan? Skyler? Eleven? Mike? Will? Jamie? Dustin? John? Veronica? Nicole? Jeff? Anna? Find out in the next chapter who Donald killed.

Chapter 11
Donald is looking over his intended victims in order: Negan, Skyler, Eleven, Mike, Will, Jamie, Dustin, John, Veronica, Nicole, Jeff, and Anna. His now ex-boyfriend Alex, who he’s punishing, is being held back by his gang. Donald tells the group that he just cannot decide. Then he finally has an idea. He approaches the group and proceeds to play “Eenie, Meenie, Moe” with them.


 * EENIE - Negan
 * MEENIE - Skyler
 * MINY - Eleven
 * MO - Mike
 * CATCH - Will
 * A - Jamie
 * TIGER - Dustin
 * BY - John
 * HIS - Veronica
 * TOE - Nicole
 * IF - Jeff
 * HE - Anna
 * HOLLERS - Jeff
 * LET - Nicole
 * HIM - Veronica
 * GO - John
 * MY - Dustin
 * MOTHER - Jamie
 * TOLD - Will
 * ME - Mike
 * TO - Eleven
 * PICK - Skyler
 * THE - Negan
 * VERY - Skyler
 * BEST - Eleven (Yay, she got the best)
 * ONE - Mike
 * AND - Will
 * YOU - Jamie
 * ARE - Dustin
 * POINTS AT NEGAN
 * POINTS AT SKYLER
 * POINTS AT ELEVEN
 * POINTS AT MIKE
 * POINTS AT WILL
 * POINTS AT JAMIE
 * POINTS AT DUSTIN
 * POINTS AT JOHN
 * POINTS AT VERONICA
 * POINTS AT NICOLE
 * POINTS AT JEFF
 * POINTS AT ANNA

Donald stands there for a moment, thinking about his possible decision. He eyes a particular person and smiles. Donald approaches his chosen victim and points Lucille at the chosen one. He declares “IT!” to -- JOHN BRAYDEN. Skyler gasps in horror upon Donald choosing her boyfriend as the sacrifice. But John is very brave. He gives Skyler the “I love you” hand gesture. Donald tells his men. “If anybody moves, anybody says anything, cut the Myers girl up (Jamie) and feed her to her little boyfriend (Will). You can blink, you can breathe, you can cry. Hell, you’re all gonna be doing that.”

Then Donald slams Lucille against John’s head. Skyler screams over this. John slowly comes back up, which surprises Donald, who says, “Look at that! Taking it like a champ!” John tells Donald to, “Suck my nuts!” And with that, Donald proceeds to bash John’s head with Lucille. Donald bashes John’s head multiple times until there is nothing left of him. John Brayden, boyfriend of Skyler, is dead. Skyler and Eleven are crying. Their friends are also crying. Jamie is having flashbacks of her Uncle Michael as this occurs. This is so horrifying for the children to see. Alex is horrified to see his friend being murdered by his psychotic ex-boyfriend.

Donald laughs sadistically. He is satisfied. He has put fear not only onto Alex. But onto all of the main characters. Even Negan, an ex-brutal psychotic killer himself, is upset by the murder that just took place in front of him. It makes Negan realize what a horrible man he once was. Donald is reminding Negan of his former self. Realizing that John was Skyler’s boyfriend, Donald points the bloodied up Lucille at Skyler. He tells her to “Lay your eyes on this.” But Skyler refuses to look. She proceeds to cry. Donald barks at her to, “TAKE A DAMN LOOK!”

This makes Negan snap. Negan jumps up and decks Donald in the face. Donald, being much smaller than Negan, flies backwards onto the ground. The punch nearly knocks him out. Before Donald can land, Negan already begins to attack him. But Donald’s gang grabs him and beats him down. Donald gets back up, pointing Negan’s own weapon at him, and shouts, “NO!” Negan stares angrily at the younger killer. Donald tells him that is a “Big No-no!” He says that none of that shit flies around here. Donald signals his gang to put him back in line.

Donald tells the group that he already told them that the first one was free. But then that he would “Shut that shit down...no exceptions.” Donald says that he doesn’t know what kind of lying assholes that they’ve been dealing with. But that he’s a man of his word. He states that first impressions are important. Donald says that he needs them to know him. He prepares Lucille for another round. He says “Back to it.” He turns to his next chosen victim -- ELEVEN. Negan, Skyler, Mike, and the others panic as Donald goes to bash Eleven.

However, before Donald can hit Eleven, SHHH! *BLOOD SPLATTERS* A SPEAR HAS BEEN SHOT THROUGH DONALD’S NECK. Donald Newton, ex-boyfriend of Alex, is dead. Donald’s body falls to the ground. This causes him to let go of the bat, which Negan retakes. Donald’s gang turns to the source of Donald’s murder -- The Raider, coming out of the darkness with a sword. The gang proceeds to shoot The Raider. But their bullets do NOT affect him. He uses his sword to deflect bullets from him. Many bullets hit back at them. The Raider proceeds to slice many of them down. They keep fighting him. But they’re just getting themselves killed.

Negan tells the survivors to go. As the group (Skyler, Eleven, Mike, Will, Jamie, Dustin, Veronica, Nicole, Jeff, Anna, and Alex) runs, Negan uses this opportunity to attack several gang members. The Raider is still in the act of killing Donald’s gang. Negan and many of the gang engage. But they’re too distracted by both threats. So Negan easily takes them down with Lucille. Using the van and their vehicles, the main characters and Negan escapes. The Raider is left with the bodies of Donald, John, and the gang.

Chapter 12
The van pulls into an old and abandoned property. Skyler’s friends also pull into the property. Negan, the Clearwood Five plus Jamie, and Skyler’s friends all exit their vehicles. They all stare at the mansion in front of them. Negan says that it’s been a very long time since he’s been here. Veronica asks what this place is. Negan claims that it’s “Home.” This is Negan’s childhood home when he was a very young William “Billy” Rollins before he became Negan the Tarevender. Negan leads the entire group inside the old mansion.

Upon walking into his old house, Negan is hit with memories of his childhood. Negan claims that he lived here with his rich father, mother, and two siblings. Negan tells Skyler, Eleven, and Jamie that they can stay in his parents room. He tells Mike, Will, and Dustin that they can stay in his old bedroom. He tells Jeff and Anna that they could have his brother’s bedroom, and he tells Veronica and Nicole that they can have his sister’s bedroom. They all separate to their assigned bedroom. Eleven and Skyler go to Negan’s parents’ bedroom while holding hands. Eleven is trying to be there for her sister, who has just lost her boyfriend. Jamie follows them behind.

Negan asks Alex if he’d like stand guard with him. Alex agrees, saying that he cannot sleep after he witnessed what Donald did to John. Negan says that he’s sorry about what Donald has done to him. Alex thanks him for his kindness. Negan nods. He tells Alex that he’ll guard the front and that Alex could guard the back. Alex accepts the assigned post. Negan and Alex separate to their respective post. In the master bedroom bathroom, Skyler is taking a shower. She is crying and depressed over John’s murder. She slides down, curling up in a ball, and proceeds to sob.

Meanwhile, Eleven is lying on the bed thinking. Jamie is lying in a sleeping bag on the floor. She turns on her side to fall asleep. She opens her eyes and looks at the window. She gasps in horror when she sees -- MICHAEL MYERS outside the window. Jamie proceeds to whimper, which gets Eleven’s attention. Eleven asks if she’s okay. Jamie points at the window. Eleven looks at the window. But Michael is gone. She asks Jamie what she saw. Jamie realizes that this was just a hallucination. She begins to cry. Eleven hugs and comforts Jamie. Eleven tells her that she’s here for her. Jamie cries in Eleven’s shoulders.

In Negan’s old bedroom, we find Mike, Will, and Dustin chilling together. They’re still traumatized by Donald’s murder of John Brayden. But they’re also still depressed over the murder of their friend Lucas. Mike says that he cannot believe that all of this is happening again. Will says he’s mostly worried about Jamie now that she’s with them. Mike says that he’s glad that Will found Jamie. He believes that Will and Jamie are great together. Dustin agrees. Will thanks them for their support. Will says that he’ll do whatever he can to protect Jamie. Will admits that he’s falling in love with Jamie. Mike nods, understanding this from his own experience with Eleven.

Down in the living room, Negan is sitting on his father’s old chair, facing the front window. As he sits there, guarding the front of the house, he begins to hear a woman’s voice. The voice says, “Billy! Dinner is ready!” Negan turns to the dining room opening. He sees MADDIE ROLLINS (30s) putting food on the table. Maddie turns to him and smiles at him. She says, “I hope you’re hungry.” Negan smiles and says that, “I miss your cooking.” Maddie disappears into thin air. Negan sighs with sadness. He declares that he misses her. It’s obvious that this was a flashback and that Maddie was Negan’s mother.

A van is driving through the dark and empty backside of town. We find driving the van is an unmasked Raider (older), whose face we do not see. He gets a text message. It’s from his younger partner, who states that Negan took them to his childhood home. The younger Raider has sent his partner the address with directions. We come to realize that the younger Raider is one of Skyler’s friends. But who? The Raider proceeds to follow the directions and heads for Negan’s old mansion. He is determined to finish this tonight.

In Negan’s parents’ bedroom, Jamie cannot sleep. She pulls out her phone and starts texting Will. In Negan’s bedroom, Will receives the text message. He smiles when he reads it. He sneaks out of the bedroom. Will and Jamie meet each other in the hallway. They wanna get out and spend time together. But they know that Negan is in the living room, so he might see them. They decide that they’ll sneak out through a window. They go into the main bathroom and climb out the window. Luckily the Rollins family has a ladder on the side of the house.

Will and Jamie make it out safely. They look at the back, which Alex is guarding. They wait for him to turn away from their position. Once he does, they make a run for it into the woods. They make it into the woods without being seen. They proceed to sit down and talk quietly. They are flirting and just escaping from the horrors that they’ve been through. They’re not going to be like typical teenagers who have sex in the woods. They’re just being young kids talking, flirting, and just spending time together without being sexual for their age.

Chapter 13
At the back porch, Alex is just sitting on the rocking chair and staring out into space. He’s drinking out of a flask. He’s trying to get the images of Donald killing John out of his head. He hears a noise coming from his right. He goes to investigate. As he does, we see the Raider walking to the backdoor. Alex finds some squirrels at the side of the house. He laughs at the squirrels. They see him and run away in fear. He turns to go back to his post and sits down. As Alex chills there, the Raider slowly comes out of the backdoor. But before we see more -- WE CUT TO --

Jeff and Anna are making out in their bedroom (Negan’s brother). Jeff says that he wishes that he had something alcoholic to drink. Anna says that they could check in the basement. She claims that rich people always have wine in a wine cellar. They decide to check it out. They quietly walk out of their room and quietly walk downstairs so that Negan doesn’t hear them. Negan is spaced out in memories of his childhood and focused on the front window that he doesn’t even notice them walking down the stairs and turning to the basement door.

Jeff and Anna go down to the basement. They find several sections that intrigue them. But they do find the cellar, which is filled with wine and other alcoholic beverages. They feel like that they’ve hit the jackpot. They look around and check out the many wines. A few of them have already been opened in the past. Jeff grabs one of them, pulling off the cork, and taking a drink. He spits it out and coughs. Anna laughs as Jeff describes it’s awful taste. Jeff says that they should try a fresh unopened one. Anna finds an opener and uses it to open an unopened bottle.

Jeff tastes it and says that it’s better than the other one. Anna starts drinking it as well. She likes it. She passes it back to Jeff and tells him that she’s going to look around the basement for all the cool stuff stored away. Jeff says okay and continues to drink. Anna steps out of the cellar. As she walks around the basement, The Raider walks in through the door to the backyard. He just misses Anna as she steps to another section. He hears Jeff singing in the cellar and heads for the cellar. He sees Jeff singing and drinking several bottles of wine. He’s getting drunk already.

The Raider sneaks in and proceeds to grab a bottle of wine. He closes the cellar door. The Raider sneaks up on Jeff and whacks him over the head with the bottle of wine, which shatters over him. Jeff goes down. The Raider uses the sharp remains of the broken bottle to stab Jeff multiples in different parts of his body. Jeff Carter, boyfriend of Anna and cousin of the late Tyler and Nancy Carter, is dead. Hearing the glass shattering, Anna goes to the cellar door and opens it. She finds her boyfriend’s dead body. She is so shocked that she can’t even scream.

Anna turns to run. But the Raider appears out of nowhere and shoves a bottle of wine down her mouth. The Raider holds her down, forcing the wine down her throat. Anna struggles to escape. But the Raider is too strong for her to escape. After a few minutes of forcing the wine down her throat, Anna’s body ceases to move. Anna has drowned from the large amount of wine going down her throat. Anna Moss, girlfriend of Jeff Carter, is dead. The Raider pulls the now empty wine bottle out of her mouth. The Raider drops her body, which lands hard on the floor.

In the living room, Negan is still watching the window. He doesn’t even know about the murders that have occurred in the basement. The Raider climbs up to the main floor. He sees Negan in the living room. He slowly sneaks up on Negan, who sees his reflection on the window. He turns around to fight. But the Raider quickly stabs him in the stomach. Negan gasps in pain. Negan backs away and falls unconscious. The Raider assumes that Negan is dead. So the Raider proceeds to go up the stairs. He hears a toilet flushing from inside the middle bathroom.

In the middle bathroom, Veronica is washing her hands and looking down at her hands. Upon finishing, she turns the faucet off. She looks up at the mirror and finds the Raider behind her. Before she can scream, the Raider covers her mouth. Veronica proceeds to struggle with him. While the Raider is stronger, Veronica proves to be stronger than most of his victims. Seeing that she isn’t giving him the chance to even pull out his knife, the Raider must use other measures to kill her. The Raider is forced to snap her neck. Veronica Carter, girlfriend of Nicole and cousin of the late Tyler and Nancy Carter, is dead.

The Raider finds an old fashion razor blade, similar to the one that Negan used to shave in The Walking Dead. This was Negan’s father’s razor, which was passed down to Negan. The Raider is fascinated by it. Meanwhile, Nicole walks out of their bedroom (Negan’s sister). She walks into the hall to look for Veronica. She notices that bathroom door is opened. She looks in and finds her girlfriend dead. Before she can scream, the Raider attacks her from behind and covers her mouth. She is not as strong as Veronica. So he has no problem with keeping her in control.

The Raider pulls out the old razor blade and uses it to slice Nicole’s throat. Nicole Price, girlfriend of Veronica, is dead. The Raider lets her body drop. In Negan’s parents’ bedroom, both Eleven and Skyler wake up to find that Jamie is missing. They wonder where she went. They walk out into the hallway. The bathroom door is closed (Veronica and Nicole’s bodies are there). They believe that Jamie is in there. So they don’t even check. They walk downstairs. They find Negan lying on the floor. Eleven runs over to her father. He’s barely conscious.

Eleven is panicking over seeing her tough father in a bad situation. He tells her that “He’s here.” They know who “He” is and panic. Alex shows up and asks what is going on. Before they can respond, the Raider appears out of nowhere and stabs Alex in the back. Skyler goes to attack him. But the Raider slaps her. Eleven proceeds to run and the Raider chases her. Eleven runs out the back door. The Raider chases her through the yard to the woods. Eleven runs through the dark woods. Will and Jamie are not there anymore.

Eleven proceeds to hide from the Raider. He runs past her position. He doesn’t even know that she’s hiding. Eleven slowly walks away from her hiding spot and slowly walks away from the woods.

Chapter 14
Back in the living room, Skyler gets back up from being slapped. She checks on Negan, who is going back and forth between being conscious and unconscious. Skyler hears Alex groaning. Seeing that her friend is still alive, Skyler goes to check up on him. Alex says that the “bastard” stabbed him in the back. Skyler checks his back. But finds that, even though there is blood, there is no wound. Alex confesses -- That’s not his blood. Skyler is confused by this. They turn to each other. Skyler realizes what he means by this. Before Skyler can say anything --

Alex pulls out a knife and stabs Skyler in the stomach. Skyler gasps in pain. ALEX HUGHES IS THE YOUNGER RAIDER! Skyler stares into Alex’s eyes. He tells her that playing a sympathetic victim has been fun. But now is the time to finish the job. A shocked Skyler is so horrified by this. Due to the blood loss, shock, and horror -- Skyler passes out. But is she dead? Alex turns to find that a terrified Eleven has witnessed this. The other kids; Mile, Dustin, Will, and Jamie have appeared out of nowhere, having also just seen Alex’s reveal and attack on Skyler.

Eleven asks Alex why he’s doing this. Alex laughs and says that because it’s his job. Alex reveals that he belongs to the same organization that the late Nancy and Tyler Carter belonged to. Alex was assigned to assist the true Raider on this mission. This means that Alex is the Stu/Mickey/Charlie of the Raiders. Remembering that Alex was present when the Raider attacked Donald and his gang, the kids realize that he’s admitting that there is a second Raider. Alex confirms this and tells Eleven that she won’t believe who the other Raider is.

A person walks into the living room. Eleven gasps when she sees who it is -- Uncle Jim. Eleven questions this with, “Uncle Jim?” But Jim shakes his head, confirming that he’s NOT the Raider. He’s shot in the back of the head by the real partner -- LAURA SHRINER -- the guidance counselor. Jim Gordon, husband of Barbara and uncle of Skyler and Eleven, is dead. Laura smiles and says, “Hey, Eleven. Surprise?” Eleven asks why Laura would be involved and do something like this. Eleven points out that Laura is such a sweet person. Laura laughs and confesses that her role as the nice guidance counselor is only a cover.

Laura confesses that her name, “Laura Shriner”, is NOT her real name. That is also a cover set up by Tarevender. Laura reveals that her true name is -- ready for the shocking reveal -- LORRAINE CARTER -- The wife of Scott Lane and mother Tyler and Nancy Carter. This shocks everyone, realizing her motive. Lorraine is not only finishing where Nancy and Tyler left off to capture Eleven and convert her to Tarevender. But to avenge her children’s deaths by the hands of Negan and Skyler. Alex says that he already took care of Skyler for her.

Lorraine thanks Alex and says that his service is no longer needed. Realizing what this means, Alex panics. He attempts to shield himself and shouts, “NO!” But Lorraine shoots him in the head. Alex Hughes, former boyfriend of the late Donald Newton and the younger accomplice Raider, is dead. The kids are horrified. Lorraine laughs sadistically. She says that Alex was a great partner but played "victim" too much. Meaning that he purposely allowed Donald to abuse him to look like a sympathetic victim when he really could have killed Donald without a problem.

Lorraine tells the kids that he wants Eleven. She claims that she has no problem with the other four personally. Therefore, she might even spare them. She even hints that there may be a place for them at Tarevender. Mike asks her why she killed Lucas if she didn’t have a grudge with them. Lorraine says that she had kidnapped Dustin to get their attention. She intended to let them live. When she attacked them at the abandoned school, she was trying to kill Skyler and take Eleven. But Lucas fought back. This confirms that she’s Lucas Sinclair’s killer.

Eleven tells Lorraine that she heard that she had died not long after giving birth to Tyler and Nancy. Lorraine confesses that she faked her death with only Scott knowing the truth. Scott helped her fake her death so that her family and friends would think that she was dead so that she can pursue her career as a Tarevender. Lorraine also reveals that Nancy and Tyler's story about Tyler becoming the Raider upon Scott's death was also a cover story. Scott Lane is still alive and has a secret role within Tarevender. But she won’t reveal this role.

Lorraine says that it’s time for her to kill Negan and Skyler, both whom are still alive. She points the gun at the injured Negan and Skyler. But Eleven charges at her. This surprises Lorraine, who is easily taken down by the younger and smaller Eleven. Lorraine is below average height of a woman her age and Eleven is above the average height of a girl her age. Inspired by Eleven’s bravery, veteran final girl Jamie joins in on the fight. Not wanting their girlfriends to get hurt, Mike and Will joins in on the fight. Dustin has the “Fuck it” attitude and joins the fight.

However, despite her smaller than average body, Lorraine is able to overwhelm the kids. She throws Jamie, Will, Dustin, and Mike off of her. The fight continues between her and Eleven, who is a lot stronger than we thought. For a child, Eleven is tough enough to fight the adult Lorraine. But Lorraine eventually overwhelms her. She chokes Eleven and tells her that she shall die for resisting. Lorraine raises the knife up in the classic unmasked Billy/Debbie/Piper style. She goes to stab Eleven when suddenly -- BANG! Lorraine is shot and falls backwards.

Eleven and the kids turn to the shooter -- ABRAHAM FORD. Abraham reveals that he’s a member of Surfack and was responding to their “Panic Call.” Eleven asks what he means. He turns to Negan, which the kids turn to him as well. Negan reveals that he pressed his “Panic button” to call for help. Abraham, who was stationed nearby, was the first responder. While he checks on Negan, Eleven checks on Lorraine. She has a bullet in her forehead. Lorraine Carter, mother of Nancy and Tyler, wife of Scott Lane, and the lead Raider of the story, is dead.

Eleven turns to Skyler. Although, Skyler is badly injured, she will make it. The sisters hug each other. Abraham tells the survivors that Surfack medical bus is on it’s way to help. Eleven thanks him. Eleven, Negan, Skyler, Mike, Will, Jamie, and Dustin all come into a group hug in relief. They have once against survived a murder spree. They are now the CLEARWOOD SEVEN

Chapter 15
The next morning, we find the Clearwood Seven and Abraham in a large bus. Skyler and Negan are being attended to by Surfack doctors. They arrive at the MAIN SURFACK HEADQUARTERS. The kids are amazed by what they see. Familiar faces of survivors who have become trained soldiers to fight off killers. Abraham leads the children out while the doctors take Negan and Skyler to their base hospital. Abraham tells them that they will be safe here. This is both a sad and happy ending for the Clearwood Seven.

In the aftermath, Will is informed of his mother’s death and Jamie is officially a runaway, Skyler and Eleven are orphans again. However, Dustin and Mike are reunited with their families. Angry that Tarevender continues to target them, a deal is made with the Hendersons and Wheelers. Surfack will protect them. But now that they’re survivors, they suggest something special for Mike, Dustin, Will, Jamie, Skyler, and Eleven. They shall become Surfacks. This is agreed to by their families. Kevin Andrews becomes Jamie and Will’s legal guardian. They will continue their relationship.

Kevin and Abraham talks with the Governor of Washington, who also has connections to Surfack. The Governor has agreed to pardon Negan of all of his previous crimes. Negan is officially no longer a criminal. And with that, Negan takes on a new name for himself. He’s called “POPS” (a reference to Terminator Genisys). But that has a bigger meaning to him now. Pops officially regains guardianship of Eleven and adopts Skyler to become her guardian until she’s eighteen. This way Eleven and Skyler both have a father and remain sisters.

Meanwhile, at the TAREVENDER HEADQUARTERS, the Governor mourns the loss of Lorraine and is upset that his mission has failed for a second time. He learns about the Clearwood Seven joining Surfack, Negan’s pardon, and he understands the situation that he’s in. He can no longer hide from his enemies. He can no longer retreat and make new plans. This is the final straw. The Governor approaches his entire army of soldiers and killers. The Governor makes an iconic declaration that is heard by Negan in The Walking Dead Season 7 finale -- “WE’RE GOING TO WAR!” All of the Tarevenders respond with, “YES, SIR!”

Confirmed Facts

 * Jamie Lloyd is from the Halloween series.
 * Alex Hughes and Donald Newton of the Scream wikia appear as a couple. But Donald isn't so innocent as he may appear.
 * The new Raider is planning on continuing where Tyler and Nancy left off.
 * MIB will reveal himself to Eleven and the Clearwood Six when in a scene similar to Eleven being confronted by the Raider and Negan in the previous story, therefore, making it a theme of having the villain and hero revealing their intentions to Eleven upon their first encounters with her. This is taken from the Terminator movies where a Connor isn't sure who is their friend and foe.
 * Despite Tyler and Nancy's actions in the previous story, their cousins Veronica and Jeff play a major part in the new story. But they are not involved with Tarevender.
 * The part where MIB saves Eleven from a gang of thugs attempting to rape her is similar ot scene in the previous story where Negan saves a girl from a gang raping her when he's seeking their clothes.
 * The picture of Eleven in her bio is a new picture released of her for Season 2. I decided to use it.
 * A BIG SURPRISED will be revealed in Chapter 7 when MIB saves the group from the Raider.
 * It is revealed that MIB is actually the very much alive Negan.